Ashlee Scholze
Sunday, August 14, 2011
Check this spanish story for me?
HABIA(there was; get rid of estaba) un reino...su UNICO hijo...las princesas(you added an extar 'e' after 's') eran malvadas(evil, wicked; makes better sense/wider range of vocabulary)... ten�an celos DEL(combine de & el to make del)...
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