What would you title this poem?

I agree with 5.7. Very careful answer, she took a long time to yze this poem of yours, so read her answer carefully. Your writing impresses me. You have potential, still you cling on non-existing meanings, "real reality". An example of this is real numbers. There is not such a thing as "real real numbers". I understand your sentimentalism behind it, still the concept of inaccuracy prevails. Your writing is clean, the architecture impresses, I stare at it from far, as a lay out, long words, an adagio of a poem. If you manage to use more careful correlations among words, and less repetitions, you will create substantial female poetry. I offer you a "bravo" for being courageous.